I always focus on what we know and begin with writing about our families.
After listening to a read aloud about mom, students turned and talked about what they liked doing with their moms, and we brainstormed a list.
I modeled how my narrative piece would look and then students practiced.
Here are some finished pieces.
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| Joeley: This is my mom.  I like to make cookies with my mom.  That is what I do with my mom. Brady: I love my mom. I hug my mom. That is what I do with my mom.  | 
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| Nevaeh: I love my mom.  We walk around and talk.  That is what I do with my mom. Hannah: I love my mom. Me and my mom lay Lego Harry Potter. That is a video game. That is what I do with my mom.  | 
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| Olivia: I love my mom.  I like to cook with my mom.  That is what I do with my mom. Ryleigh: I love my mom. We love to go to the park together. That is what I do with my mom!  | 
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| Stella: I love my mom!  We went to a friend's house.  That is what I do with my mom. Ronan: This is my mom. We play with my Pokemon. That is what I do with my mom.  | 
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| Natalee: I love my mom. We make cookies. that is what I do with my mom. | 






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